In today’s group work our group talked about “different aspects of life such as social, political context don’t play in favor of fatherhood. Like in custody battle mothers are most likely to get the custody of the child. But in contrary argument we mentioned sometimes mother don’t get the custody of the child. Because sometimes mothers are unfaith to the child, in that case father gets the custody. To me father can protect his child more than the mother. Now a days we can see in the subway or outside on the road father's are taking care of their children like they used to do around 1930s. According to the article “Fathering: Paradoxes, Contradiction, and Dilemmas”, Scott mentions “… three out of four American fathers said they regularly read magazine about child care, and nearly as many men as women were members of the PTA” (436).
Coltrane, Scott. “Fathering: Paradoxes, Contradiction, and Dilemmas”. Men`s Lives. 8th ed. Ed. Michael S. Kimmel and Michael A.Messner. New York: Allyn&Bacon, 2010.432-449.Print.
This is a good start but you were asked to compose an argumentative paragraph, not describe what you did with your group? Please compose a well-developed paragraph with a topic sentence bases on the claim your group developed. Then support that claim with examples your group discussed and examples from Coltrane's reading. Good MLA documentation but remember that book titles must be underlined or italicized.
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